“To reveal in a text the shape of its pounding”: a writing exercise

February was a hectic month (trying to annotate all of books from the Brooklyn Library system before moving to Queens! settling into a new apartment! applying for things! ), but we are so back, & I’m excited to share the prompts from a generative writing session I faciliated this past week.


This multi-part exercise works best when done without reading all of the different parts ahead of time.

Part I: Guided Freewrite

Set an ​interval timer​ for every two minutes (10 minutes total). Begin freewriting, and introduce/incorporate each of the words below into your freewriting every two minutes.

  • Diction
  • Fog
  • Yank
  • Vertice
  • Tense

Part II: Language Bank

  • 3 things you can admit, 3 things you don’t want to explain
  • Yet the root of ____ is ____.
  • What did I know of ____ but ____.
  • 3 words you have pronounced wrong

The fill-in-the-blanks come from lines in WHEREAS.

Part III: Prompts

Drawing from Parts I & II, circle at least one line or idea you want to expand. Choose a prompt (or combine two together).

  • Write a poem in which the title is a question and every line is an answer OR the title is an answer and every line is a question.
  • Long Soldier writes, “I express commitment to reveal in a text the shape of its pounding.” Consider what you circled and sketch the shape of its pounding. After you have a form, write inside or outside of it.
  • Write a poem that acknowledges the plural you you’re a part of. Consider where the I is located within this you, and experiment with using brackets/footnotes/blackouts/etc. to articulate their relationship.

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